[I had previously sent these comments via email, but am adding them here for completeness] Timing: 25'+5' . Actual time: 26 minutes. Good. I really enjoyed this talk! Overall comments:many figures not sharpshow standard model expectations in early slides as numerical values? Specific comments:P2: PT--> pT on figure: remove root histogram title. change B-> D* tau nu to R_D* ? P4: remove "etc." or fill inP5: several figures not sharp/labels too small too readP7: move bottom line (errors) one column to leftP8: figures not sharpP13 (still incomplete)P21 (still incomplete)
I really enjoyed this talk!
Overall comments:
Specific comments:
P2: PT--> pT
on figure: remove root histogram title.
change B-> D* tau nu to R_D* ?
P4: remove "etc." or fill in
P5: several figures not sharp/labels too small too read
P7: move bottom line (errors) one column to left
P8: figures not sharp
P13 (still incomplete)
P21 (still incomplete)