Dear Chirstian,
thanks for the updated version of your nice poster.
My only comment is about the integrated dose part.
I would move the comment in parenthesis "(several assumptions and large uncertainty)" from the 3rd bullet to the 2nd bullet : " ....to estimate the SVD sensor dose (several assumptions and large uncertainty)."
In fact the assumption and uncertainty in the measurement is not only related to the conversion factor, but to many other things: correlation coefficients between diamonds and SVD occupancy stable and not different during injection or machine work, diamond dose well measured (and we know fo example that we have some saturation of the diamonds always present during injections, that is then causing some underestimation of the dose, by some unknown ammount) etc.