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Saurabhsandilya - gmail.com
26 Feb 2021, 06:53
Hello,

It was a pleasure reading the well written proceedings draft. I have few comments at your disposal, please have a look:
Section 1
=o= The Belle II experiment is a B-factory experiment located at the KEK laboratory -> The Belle II experiment is located at the KEK laboratory
=o= of which 34.6 fb−1 was taken at COM energy of 10.58 GeV, corresponding to the Υ(4S) resonance, and 3.2 fb −1 was taken 60 MeV below Υ(4S) resonance. -> of which 3.2 fb −1 was taken 60 MeV below Υ(4S) resonance. (the data taken at Y(4S) obvious from aforementioned texts)
=o= Acronym VXD, CDC and ECL never used, so they can be dropped
=o= PID is defined twice (in later text)

Section 2
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=o= You may want to change the symbol \ell (lepton) to electron, as discuss only about electron.
=o= The sentence with text "suppress the continuum backgrounds, where" doesn't read well. You amy want to rephrase it.

Section 3
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=o= for decay reconstruction -> for other B decay reconstruction?
=o= You may want to use the term B^{0}_{tag} instead of B_{tag}, to be consistent with definition in the caption.
=o= momentum and energy in the COM frame -> momentum and energy in the COM frame, respectively.


Regards,
Saurabh
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Afodor - physics.mcgill.ca
26 Feb 2021, 19:28
Thank you for your comments, Saurabh. I believe most of them are addressed in the newest version of the draft.

Regards,
Andrea

Saurabhsandilya - gmail.com wrote on 26 Feb 2021, 06:53:

Hello,

It was a pleasure reading the well written proceedings draft. I have few comments at your disposal, please have a look:
Section 1
=o= The Belle II experiment is a B-factory experiment located at the KEK laboratory -> The Belle II experiment is located at the KEK laboratory
=o= of which 34.6 fb−1 was taken at COM energy of 10.58 GeV, corresponding to the Υ(4S) resonance, and 3.2 fb −1 was taken 60 MeV below Υ(4S) resonance. -> of which 3.2 fb −1 was taken 60 MeV below Υ(4S) resonance. (the data taken at Y(4S) obvious from aforementioned texts)
=o= Acronym VXD, CDC and ECL never used, so they can be dropped
=o= PID is defined twice (in later text)

Section 2
----------
=o= You may want to change the symbol \ell (lepton) to electron, as discuss only about electron.
=o= The sentence with text "suppress the continuum backgrounds, where" doesn't read well. You amy want to rephrase it.

Section 3
-----------
=o= for decay reconstruction -> for other B decay reconstruction?
=o= You may want to use the term B^{0}_{tag} instead of B_{tag}, to be consistent with definition in the caption.
=o= momentum and energy in the COM frame -> momentum and energy in the COM frame, respectively.


Regards,
Saurabh

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